Whisping, controlling, fearful
light through buildings, with a tired mist
roses and leafs screaming against
notes leaves metallic footprints, beyond transparent sight
purple clouds, black sparkle,
stairways, lost in an exhausting nothingness
(min första dikt på engelska på väldigt länge/my frist poem in English in a long time)
Yolanda and her creative scream 
John skriver:
Your English is pretty good, Yolanda. 🇬🇧🇺🇸
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Haha, thanks (;
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Rivers Renewed skriver:
Wonderful!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks ^^;
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ugetse skriver:
Very beautiful♥️
Have a nice evening Yolanda
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^; You too!
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moviefanman skriver:
I agree, your English is very good.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks ^^;
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summer with monika skriver:
There’s movement and grace in every line… in any language!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
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vittynablog skriver:
it is beautiful very intense,
enter the soul! <3
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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Margaret skriver:
Wow! 🙂
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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Margaret skriver:
You’re welcome Yolanda ❤️
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
^^,
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Margaret skriver:
🙂🙂
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kenhume79 skriver:
Fantastic Yolanda! 😁👏 Especially considering you don’t write in English very often! 📝 Some wonderful and strong imagery here! 😁
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
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Evolution of Self skriver:
Brilliant Yolanda
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks ^^;
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johncoyote skriver:
A amazing poem dear friend. I loved the poetry.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you! :)
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johncoyote skriver:
You are welcome dear Yolanda. I hope I made you smile.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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johncoyote skriver:
Reblogga detta på johncoyote och kommenterade:
A mazing poem shared by a talented writer.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
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johncoyote skriver:
You are welcome dear Yolanda.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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Renee Espriu skriver:
It is wonderfully written! You surely understand all the subtle nuances when you write in English and it has all the emotions within. I surely could take some lessons from you. Do take care.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet skriver:
A beautiful poem with striking, vivid imagery! Love this, Yolanda! <3
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot:)
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OIKOS™- Art, Books & more skriver:
Reblogga detta på OPENED HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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OIKOS™- Art, Books & more skriver:
Fully agree to John’s comment. Its difficult writing poetry in a foreign language. xx Michael
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
It is (:
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Stella McHugh skriver:
‘Light through buildings…’ and ‘ ‘beyond transparent sight’
The first, simplistic but effective imagery – the second has the effect of contrast – yet not ! Clever idea – the confounding nature of what we see and what we experience or know.
Keep well.
Stella
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
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Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet skriver:
Very evocative poem, Yolanda! Vivid imagery! <3
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
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Tressa skriver:
Absolutely fantastic imagery! I would say this is a word painting of loneliness, a cold, years-long loneliness, that the speaker is forced to confront as the outer world shifts to winter.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Oh, thanks a lot:)
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blackbonnie64 skriver:
Emotionally wonderful!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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https://graziadenaro.wordpress.com/ skriver:
Bellissime emozioni che si traducono in pensieri, molto apprezzati. Complimenti Yolanda, Grazia!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot :)
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Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet skriver:
Yolanda, this is an exquisite poem…dark and atmospheric with vivid imagery! I enjoyed it very much! ❤
Have a great day! 🙂
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