Shadow, tranparent, lack of color
diary, protection, my mind
snow is falling thorugh – blinding stars, with a dark touch
echoes, the past, every perception
negative, bubbling thoughts, screaming vocals
between fear and frustration
whispering identity and boundries
Silently, fast, hesistant.
Yolanda - "Det här är mitt privata krig" 
I hear u skriver:
Nice one
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you:)
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I hear u skriver:
no need dear
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
:)
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Timothy Price skriver:
That’s an excellent, but painful poem.
”snow is falling thorugh – blinding stars, with a dark touch
echoes, the past, every perception”
Are especially fantastic lines. Weaving words into images perfectly.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
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Timothy Price skriver:
You are welcome.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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OIKOS™- Art, Books & more skriver:
Beautiful! xx Michael
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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datta skriver:
” silently fast and hesitant” really ‘powerful’!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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Ping: Poetry: Shades of filter. – Sneaky Webcams
Doug skriver:
Snow has its shadow when its crystal is letting starlight be filtered in soft sorrow, a song that echos the bubbling screams in a brook that yet moves fast to scream in a babble, hesitating around a rock to sing like ripples are triples. Thrice in fear and yet a melody.
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Sandy N skriver:
The way you can feel such emotion and picture your poetry as one is reading it, is amazing. it’s chilling in such a powerful way. love this.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Oh, thanks a lot ^^,
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dustyreviewer skriver:
This is really good!
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Didi's Art Design skriver:
Greatly penned, my dear Yolanda :)
Hugs and love
Didi
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
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Didi's Art Design skriver:
:) :) :)
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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etriplettwrites skriver:
I love this so much! The form you used by expressing sort of desperate emotions with large words that just hit you with the tone of the poem. Wonderfully done!
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Thanks a lot ^^;
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Earthpages.org skriver:
Reminds me a bit of T. S. Eliot, ”The Hollow Men,” Part V
Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom
Between the conception
And the creation
Between the emotion
And the response
Falls the Shadow
Life is very long
Between the desire
And the spasm
Between the potency
And the existence
Between the essence
And the descent
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom
For Thine is
Life is
For Thine is the
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.
https://allpoetry.com/the-hollow-men
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