
Down town, sparkes of happenings
colors, shades of transparency
narrating, watching, living
dark thought in a mind, beyond
silent screams by a path of a shoulder
without a thought of a whispering brain
thinking like a story teller, with shadows of nature
builings raising up a city filled with trashes secrets
explosion of bright colors in the sky
.. just my mind thought music,
The city keeps looking back
roads under a night with stars in the sky.
marcello comitini skriver:
I really like this poem. it has beautiful lines and beautiful images. Furthermore is beautiful, the verse that says: ”.. just my mind thought music”🙏
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot :)
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Renee Espriu skriver:
I love the way your poem connects to the images of your photo. Brings it all to life in every nuance.
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Suzette Benjamin skriver:
Very lovely! I like the pinks.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks ^^
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sandyroybessandbugzy skriver:
Especially after all the quietness of lock down this brings to my mind how a city felt. Thank you for writing this poem.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks!! Glad you like it:)
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Susan Strasser, Blogger & Memoirist skriver:
I love the splashes of ’80s pinks
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks ^^; glad you like it:)
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windowcolquhoun810 skriver:
I particularly like the line: buildings raising up a city filled with trashes secrets.
It brings to mind how the city in the day is busy and rushed but the hidden, secretive lives are only revealed under the cloak of darkness.
This is a thought-provoking poem! Applauding you Yolanda! 👏🏻👏🏻🌹
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot! ^^;
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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A great descriptive poem. xx Michael
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks ^^; glad you like it!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks for sharing:)
GillaGilla
Suzassippi skriver:
I have no idea how you created that picture, but it is mesmerizing to me. Beautiful, as is the poem.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot! Happy that you like it:)
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Unfurling Seashell skriver:
Lovely
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lblooom skriver:
I love the combination of the picture and the poem
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot!
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cmartzloff skriver:
I really love the image you created to go with your poem. So well done!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot ^^;
GillaGilla
Image Clipping Path India skriver:
Love the creativity in these pictures. Amazing art.
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