Deep breath in a shallow world
existance, hair tests, fear
strangers passing by, within
sunset screams near by
notes of tears, rainbow shades
roof tops where builings should end
reacting in charcoal.
Poetry: Mixed
02 lördag Mar 2024
Posted in Yolanda - författare / Whriter
Yolanda and her creative scream 
Ali Grimshaw skriver:
I enjoyed your poem. I especially like, ”Deep breath in a shallow world”
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot!
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Destiny skriver:
wow… profound and so beautifully expressed, Yolanda 🤍✨
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Oh, thanks a lot
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Destiny skriver:
so welcome 🤍
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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beetleypete skriver:
‘Sunset screams’ is interesting. I hear sunset softly moaning, now I live in the countryside.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thank you ^^;
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scifimike70 skriver:
You have a most unique way with words when it comes to poems, Yolanda. Thank you for sharing.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Oh, thanks a lot. So nice of you to say :)
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scifimike70 skriver:
You’re very welcome. ✨✨✨
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
^^;
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