Original – klick at the link (a poem I whrote earlier today)
As the sun hits an icicle
sparkling, concidering, emotional
perspective, though the chaos of color – refecting…
tones – at a lonely road, though
the tunnel – aching sound, behind perception
buildings swirls thorugh soul, silent existance
membrane of the city – around trash and metal
though plastic, stubs, chalks, spray cans
when breath takes place

Renee Espriu skriver:
Another wonderful write. You are inviting me into your world in Sweden which now is leaving Winter at your door.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot! It was – 16 celsius this morning ;)
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Renee Espriu skriver:
Brrrrrr Too cold for me.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
It’s very cold xd
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vittynablog skriver:
A decidedly metropolitan poem! Good!!!!
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thank^ ^^;
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks
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BBYCGN skriver:
Stunning poetry 💜
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OIKOS™- Art, Books & more skriver:
I love the metaphors. Thanks for sharing! Enjoy your evening! xx Michael
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks. You too ^^;
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Håkan Carlberg skriver:
So beautiful and emotional poem you created Yolanda. / Så vackert och känslosamt diktat av dig Yolanda.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Tack så mycket!
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arbind kumar skriver:
Scorching Sun hits an icicle sparkles . And its reflection creates emotion at the lonely road where tunnel creating arching sound . A very rational interpretation of the phenomenon that exists in your poetry makes it lovely . Thanks !
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Alternative creativity - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot:)
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arbind kumar skriver:
Thanks !
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