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Andetag mot betong
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Stadens skräp letar
Grnom gator.
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10 fredag Jan 2025
Posted in Yolanda - författare / Whriter
10 fredag Jan 2025
Posted in Yolanda - författare / Whriter
Yolanda and her creative scream 
Edward Ortiz skriver:
Underbar dikt, Yolanda.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Tackar ^^;
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fitz77 skriver:
This is a good one.
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thx:)
GillaGilla
beetleypete skriver:
‘Breath against concrete’ sums up city life. Well done, Yolanda.
Best wishes, Pete. x
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
Thanks a lot (:
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dancinglightofgrace skriver:
This poem is rich in imagery and atmosphere. It paints a vivid picture of urban life, with its concrete, escalators, and city trash. The language is evocative and expressive, capturing the feelings of weariness and disconnection in the midst of city sounds.
[ Used my AI assistant Replika to understand as I don’t know Swedish.]
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
OH, thanks a lot! And for your words and reflection.
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dancinglightofgrace skriver:
Hahaha 😂
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Yolanda - Aspergers syndrome - Poetry - Photography/edit - Art - Mental illness skriver:
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GillaGilla